Simone2012年6月大学英语四级考试作文范文
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四级考试还没有开始，下面的只是供参考 现在距离英语四六级考试剩下不到一个月的时间，面对考试将近，好学网英语四六级为大家整理了大量资料供大家参考学习。在此，预祝大家顺利通过四六级考试！ The World Expo in 2010(世博会)英文作文 The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会) The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai. How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人) Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” 2)产生这一现象的原因 3)你的看法 Certificate Craze On Campus 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。 高分范文 Certificate Craze On Campus In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear? 精品推荐： 好学网校课堂：一线名师+课程答疑 2012英语六级考试精品复习资料汇总 2012英语四级考试精品复习资料汇总 好学网六步高效学习法 [4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. [7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 【亮点点评】 [1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。 [2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。 [3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。 [4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 [5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。 [6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。 [7]用于引出“我”的观点。 [8]“当谈到或提及…时”。 [9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。 [10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. 临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。 2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. 临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。 3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. 临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
